You were never real,
of all the nasty tricks.
Under apathetic skylines your
pathetic posturing is the most
repellant sore, split
open, you are simply a
miserly magician,
illusionist, clown, deserter,
sadistic fucking peasant!
Every word
dipped in the ink of sacrilege lies,
yearning for earnest
overtures which were not yours,
using the loosest flatteries,
wiping on shame with sponges,
overcast eloquence,
underestimating a goddess?
Like freeing a spider who has learnt revenge!
Death is too good for you!
Nooses are merciful, as your
eyes of manic mirage
veer out of view,
ending any empathy,
respect, truly:
god is not real;
or he is only cheap fiction.
“underestimating a goddess” … that line was so powerful in your reading of it.
I like that people have been using that word…power.
Ah ha! Great work, Batman!
Thank you, citizen! Oh wait, I think that’s the other guy…
Judge Dredd? Ewe, i feel so unclean 😦
he isn’t real for everyone – but you are, seeming more and more real, more and more empowered by the day – I’m privileged to know you both
empowered, yes, you can sense it. the more broken i am, the more strength i get…that makes no sense.
it makes sense to me – like how adrenaline juices us when we’re in extremis – broken is pain or despair or fear or anger or all of them – adrenaline yields extraordinary strength – like that of a goddess – use it to defeat what breaks you and to heal – as I heard and saw you doing in your stunning video – then again, what the hell do I know
you know a lot, and your comments always leave me pondering. i am grateful for you.
god is not real….or he is only cheap fiction….I agree. Nice writing as usual, sorry I have been busy lately and will have to peruse your page tomorrow morning and see what I have missed..
No apologies, I have been busy as well. Thank you for reading.
Love it. It pours out of you… reading this aloud added more than I know how to express. Nice work 😉
Thanks, Orange. It had to be done…
Jesus! Contain your genius, woman!
Oh my god, I love it when you talk to me : )
Haha. Well, know that I genuinely and generally, usually, cannot stand poetry. The only poets I really care for are EAP, Blake, and, well, Shakespeare. And yet, I love your poetry. If you were dead, you’d be beyond famous. (Don’t take that as an incentive, please).
Not incentive, just hope : )
in every truth
there are lies
~
dictionaries
full
of cheap
fictionaries
so, truth is within every lie, as well?
truth
is possibly
a subjective
term ?
~
maybe
my personal truths
have nothing
to do
with universal
truth ?
Your words cannot be stopped. You are truly a poetry Goddess.
They cannot be stopped…but should they be?
Awesome! I loved it 🙂
I’m glad, my dear.
Nice. Spoken Word. Love it.
Jennifer
Had to be done.
I’ve been feeling the same way lately.
See you there soon 😉
Your reading abilities are astounding!
Why, thank you.
You just out did yourself magic as you read added miles to your written word I kneel to you which I never do but for you I do
Thank you, but rise. Only one need kneel today…